Here is Draft #3. I have been watching this thing over and over for days. There are still things I need to tweak, and I would appreciate it if you had any suggestions. I've been staring at it for so long that I will probably miss some of them.
How's the audio? Better? And the story?
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Great improvement from your earlier drafts! I think the flow is much better and I like the music you added to the text at the beginning and how trolls just pops up and the music changes...good little fixes to, like zooming and what not`
ReplyDeleteI also dig how you introduce a successful troll with the Oprah bit, especially the way you say "not even Oprah!" muaahahahaha :D
Good imagery for the ideas you have chosen to include (which are good also, like the "don't feed the trolls part).
Only thing I would work on is the transitions a little more, like between images using fade or something of that sort. I'm assuming you want to add something @ 3:42ish as well...maybe visually show [breaking]/social norms...enforcing codes of conduct? 3:57 visually show writing...rules being broken?
Love how you end with the question "Who are you if you if no one knows anything about you is even true?"
How did you record the audio? I'm sure you hear the little trip ups...maybe try using the mic and sound booth in the Media Development Center?
Great work missy, I really learned a lot from your stuff...I like trolls, it a weird sorta way! emi*