Final Video!

Yay! My project is finally finished!
Here is the final version of my video.

Draft #3 has been posted

Here is Draft #3. I have been watching this thing over and over for days. There are still things I need to tweak, and I would appreciate it if you had any suggestions. I've been staring at it for so long that I will probably miss some of them.

How's the audio? Better? And the story?